tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post1552587554866245262..comments2023-10-08T05:52:58.935-07:00Comments on Katytastic: Underneath The MistletoeAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07615258719942916382noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-32046887092918484822010-05-12T18:15:08.523-07:002010-05-12T18:15:08.523-07:00My name is Jerry Carner I was browsing internet an...My name is Jerry Carner I was browsing internet and found your blog. The author did a great job. I will subscribe to your RSS feeds. Thank you for your contribution. I am a web designer myself. And here some examples of the websites that I designed for <a href="http://www.unclepaydayloan.com" rel="nofollow">payday loans canada</a> <a href="http://www.unclepaydayloan.com/payday-loan.shtml" rel="nofollow">payday loan</a> company.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-81403104742686907642009-12-22T15:55:48.126-08:002009-12-22T15:55:48.126-08:00Very sweet. Good job! I want to see more-lol.Very sweet. Good job! I want to see more-lol.Karen Denisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-29406169506833516452009-12-22T13:08:50.222-08:002009-12-22T13:08:50.222-08:00This was super sweet and cute. Such a fun excerpt ...This was super sweet and cute. Such a fun excerpt to read. I love that it was her first kiss.BK Mattinglyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13758638245846622284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-18571030573039480182009-12-22T08:02:26.977-08:002009-12-22T08:02:26.977-08:00Oooo, Kat! That was sigh-worthy, indeed! I love a ...Oooo, Kat! That was sigh-worthy, indeed! I love a first kiss and you rocked it, girl! Thanks so much for joining in the fun and making this party so awesome!Sherrinda Ketchersidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07581676437345249386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-4303774157851374472009-12-22T05:45:30.131-08:002009-12-22T05:45:30.131-08:00Oh, this is so awesome! I LOVE this kiss--and her...Oh, this is so awesome! I LOVE this kiss--and her thoughts as well!<br /><br />Great use of first person, present tense--so hard to do well! Hats off to you!<br /><br />Jenni JamesJenni Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14340454147439103595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-70338076664697909822009-12-21T21:28:22.238-08:002009-12-21T21:28:22.238-08:00Wow, I so know how she's feeling and the last ...Wow, I so know how she's feeling and the last line, I loved it. I really like those kinds of lines.Hayley Lovellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16786674202167099600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-57426817437442852232009-12-21T20:34:16.696-08:002009-12-21T20:34:16.696-08:00Great imagery! I love the last line. And I love th...Great imagery! I love the last line. And I love that this starts with dancing, it feels very natural! Thanks for sharing this scene!Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-86774399555540606782009-12-21T18:45:08.445-08:002009-12-21T18:45:08.445-08:00Oooo
That last line is one of those fist-to-chest...Oooo<br /><br />That last line is one of those fist-to-chest lines. Nice!Sara Raaschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01196505323463444186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-48353220328949412362009-12-21T18:36:20.720-08:002009-12-21T18:36:20.720-08:00Great insight to a first kiss.Great insight to a first kiss.Pepperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02771295798003844102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-21648095113697375322009-12-21T18:34:00.761-08:002009-12-21T18:34:00.761-08:00That's a beautiful picture in my mind. The dan...That's a beautiful picture in my mind. The dance...the kiss...the fear of floating away. :0) <br /><br />Good jobKristi Faithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17527544253341529009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-53945131928419872532009-12-21T17:47:58.476-08:002009-12-21T17:47:58.476-08:00I love the way the tone shifts after "Then th...I love the way the tone shifts after "Then the music slows..."Sara {Rhapsody and Chaos}https://www.blogger.com/profile/09824996048264979275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-68784579185182484942009-12-21T16:33:58.944-08:002009-12-21T16:33:58.944-08:00I loved this, especially her not wanting to let go...I loved this, especially her not wanting to let go for fear of floating away.C R Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13212244053084461118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-15847018101331352582009-12-21T15:21:04.268-08:002009-12-21T15:21:04.268-08:00loved this...just sweet and special. not letting g...loved this...just sweet and special. not letting go...nice touch. thanks for sharing. :)<br /><br />jeannie<br /><a href="http://jeanniecampbell.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Where Romance Meets Therapy</a>Jeannie Campbell, LMFThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13958943404601029395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-68663708699109465852009-12-21T14:10:59.930-08:002009-12-21T14:10:59.930-08:00That is awesome imagery. You definitely captured ...That is awesome imagery. You definitely captured the feeling of a first kiss :)Laurenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11795668965659926769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-59351512035750404012009-12-21T14:07:56.261-08:002009-12-21T14:07:56.261-08:00very sweet - just what a first kiss ought to be.very sweet - just what a first kiss ought to be.Mary E Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13119298615414367828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-30945647165877564272009-12-21T13:13:39.742-08:002009-12-21T13:13:39.742-08:00Lovely first kiss. So beautiful that she was afrai...Lovely first kiss. So beautiful that she was afraid to let go. :)Jennifer Shirkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16970585847385511795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-24941943505689459882009-12-21T11:37:14.348-08:002009-12-21T11:37:14.348-08:00I love first kisses. Very romantic!I love first kisses. Very romantic!V. Shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00406440235719919992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-17362926767415078902009-12-21T11:35:32.969-08:002009-12-21T11:35:32.969-08:00That was so romantic! Way better then Lola's f...That was so romantic! Way better then Lola's first kiss. Lol!<br /><br />I loved the last line too.Jadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02444920778218867295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-17855852176309938482009-12-21T11:17:57.758-08:002009-12-21T11:17:57.758-08:00Agree with the floating. It captures a girls first...Agree with the floating. It captures a girls first kiss wonderfully! I also like how she talks about what she expected and what she didn't. Loved it.Kelly Lymanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14773120663217816189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-22990105325422328962009-12-21T11:03:06.274-08:002009-12-21T11:03:06.274-08:00That last line is super. Nice job!That last line is super. Nice job!Tricia J. O'Brienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05993110400088806252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-48066304824662331582009-12-21T10:08:42.309-08:002009-12-21T10:08:42.309-08:00Awww, so sweet. I loved it! It made me smile :)Awww, so sweet. I loved it! It made me smile :)Staysihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10870048222728854472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-48264504059918593382009-12-21T09:36:14.017-08:002009-12-21T09:36:14.017-08:00dido on the floating away bit. I was there on the ...dido on the floating away bit. I was there on the dance floor with her.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09687047513163296827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-48001785002605903472009-12-21T09:21:29.689-08:002009-12-21T09:21:29.689-08:00I loved this! I love the floating away metaphor. I...I loved this! I love the floating away metaphor. It was very cute for a first kiss. It so made me smile.Nicole Settlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06205918337710478398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-81763206326946220362009-12-21T09:18:09.340-08:002009-12-21T09:18:09.340-08:00So sweet and romantic! I love first kisses. :)So sweet and romantic! I love first kisses. :)Nataliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861022355718378425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6891543839553947104.post-66750447487340636832009-12-21T09:01:13.695-08:002009-12-21T09:01:13.695-08:00Awesome! I love that she thinks she might float aw...Awesome! I love that she thinks she might float away. Too sweet.Tanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10518718614911804428noreply@blogger.com